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III. Sentence Fragments
A sentence fragment occurs when you punctuate a partial sentence
as if it were a complete sentence. Sentence fragments are
missing a subject or a predicate (verb or verb phrase)--and sometimes
both.
Common fragment errors occur when:
A. a verb is missing
Fragment: The foremost leader of the
free world.
Correct: The foremost leader of the
free world signed a treaty to ban the testing of nuclear weapons.
B. a subject is missing
Fragment:
Separated visible light into a spectrum of color.
Correct: Isaac Newton separated visible
light into a spectrum of color.
C. Relative pronouns, subordinating conjunctions, or verbal phrases
begin a clause, creating an incomplete thought.
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Relative pronouns (that, which, whichever, who, whoever, whom,
whomever) signal a clause that needs the rest of the sentence
to complete the thought and make sense. Don't let a phrase
beginning with a relative pronoun stand alone.
Fragment: People who work the
night shift at factories.
Correct: People who work the night
shift at factories have to adjust to sleeping during the day.
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Subordinating conjunctions and conjunctive adverbs combine
an incomplete thought or phrase to a complete sentence.
If you let the phrase stand alone, you create a sentence fragment.
Fragment: Although people may
feel discouraged about the presidential debates.
Correct: Although people may feel
discouraged about the presidential debates, they still should
vote in the next election.
Some
subordinating conjunctions and
conjunctive
adverbs:
| after |
though |
although |
assuming that |
though |
although |
| if |
until |
before |
provided that |
therefore |
however |
| as if |
while |
since |
because |
whereas |
nevertheless |
| how |
unless |
where |
whenever |
also |
otherwise |
3. Verbal phrases--verb forms that
function as subjects, objects, or modifiers--become fragments when
they are not attached to a main sentence.
Fragment: Mountain biking through
the Allegheny foothills.
Correct: I went mountain biking through
the Allegheny foothills.
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